viernes, 14 de junio de 2013

It is obvious the fact that using mobile phones while driving is very dangerous and put human lives in danger. Therefore, laws which regulate this behaviour are neccesary. Taking into account the high statistics data from death in countries in which laws do not regulate the use of cell phones in moving cars, we will be safer with the prohibition of the use of this element.

lunes, 10 de junio de 2013

People in my country reflect a contradiction of being a nation of immigrants that does not like immigrants, because we discriminate them and we forget about the fact that our ancestors were immigrants . When we meet an immigrant from Latin America or poor countries instantly we considered this person inferior to us, or people who come from countries which belong to the First World and we do not even consider that we are descendents of immigrants. What is more, there is a natural tendency to reject specific immigrants judging them as a result of stereotypes that we have built along our life. On the other hand, stereotypes are not quite uncertain because many of them are true and also negative. In conclusion, we discriminate immigrants without thinking that many of them have contributed to the development of our country and our ancesters were aliens in our country.
                                       The contradiction of discriminating immigrants

People in my country reflect a contradiction of being a nation of immigrants that does not like immigrants. When we meet an immigrant from Latin America or poor countries instantly we considered this person inferior to us or people who come from countries which belong to the First World and we do not even consider that we are descendents of immigrants. What is more, there is a natural tendency to reject specific immigrants judging them as a result of stereotypes that we have built along our life. On the other hand, stereotypes are not quite uncertain because many of them are true and also negative. In conclusion, we discriminate immigrants without thinking that many of them have contributed to the development of our country and our ancesters were aliens in our country.

viernes, 7 de junio de 2013

1) In my country people who have completed their basic education have the opportunity to be involved in different careers. People who want to continue studying after finishing school are able to do this without paying any amount of money. Government grant towards education provide people varied opportunities to access to an educational system. In conclusion, people in my country have the opportunity to study which is different in other countries and foreign people can find in Argentina an education they cannot find in their original countries.

2) Education is one of the most important things in life, because without it, you cannot contribute to the world or earn money, and do not have knowledge. People who want to continue studying after finishing school are able to do this without paying any amount of money. Government grant towards education provide people varied opportunities to access to an educational system. In conclusion the communication, research, reporting, and collaboration skills that education provides can produce a generation of individuals who are better prepared for any career and can make greater contributions to society.

Metacognitive analysis

In my paragraph the overall meaning does not vary so much. My topic sentence is more appropiated than my mate's topic sentence because my sentence focuses on the education in a general view and my mate's topic sentence is foucused on one specific aspect of the education: studying to earn money. My paragraph contains some repetitions because it is specified to leave the message clea