1) In my country people who have completed their basic education have the opportunity to be involved in different careers. People who want to continue studying after finishing school are able to do this without paying any amount of money. Government grant towards education provide people varied opportunities to access to an educational system. In conclusion, people in my country have the opportunity to study which is different in other countries and foreign people can find in Argentina an education they cannot find in their original countries.

2) Education is one of the most important things in life, because without it, you cannot contribute to the world or earn money, and do not have knowledge. People who want to continue studying after finishing school are able to do this without paying any amount of money. Government grant towards education provide people varied opportunities to access to an educational system. In conclusion the communication, research, reporting, and collaboration skills that education provides can produce a generation of individuals who are better prepared for any career and can make greater contributions to society.

Metacognitive analysis

In my paragraph the overall meaning does not vary so much. My topic sentence is more appropiated than my mate's topic sentence because my sentence focuses on the education in a general view and my mate's topic sentence is foucused on one specific aspect of the education: studying to earn money. My paragraph contains some repetitions because it is specified to leave the message clea